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hyperdulia again

"cry like a blubbered"

I dig it. Make that into a poem Hyper.

When into your eyes I look

I am caught by a hook

as deadly to me as that which hangs from any fisher's reel

in Mobile

Those eyes

as blue as the southern skies

a single tear falls

and alls

i know is i'm conquered

and moved to cry like a blubbered

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the first poem is beautiful, Hyper, becuase it shows the love you have for your children. That's why i like it so much :wub:

While it didn't exactly make me "cry like a blubbered", (I save those for special! not that your poem isn't :unsure::sweat: ) but it did make me crack a smile. :)

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When into your eyes I look

I am caught by a hook

as deadly to me as that which hangs from any fisher's reel

in Mobile

Those eyes

as blue as the southern skies

a single tear falls

and alls

i know is i'm conquered

and moved to cry like a blubbered

I knew you could do it!

Cool. :D

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