My Intelligence Infusions

[Guest Aluigi]

okay i made somethin about with St. Seton, it's true and stuff and it's not like anyone would check... yeah it's a good thing

what do you think of this sentence, is it awkward? if so, how could I make it less awkward keeping all the same points?

[quote]Current clothing styles lack the prudence of the past as immodest dress makes women less respected tempting men to impure thoughts and actions, while the discourteous garb of men indicates and perpetuates a lack of morality.[/quote]

it's like, the thesis of the paper