Sammy Blaze Posted August 19, 2004 Share Posted August 19, 2004 Yo do yall need another verse for the abortion track? I just felt like posting this verse, I wrote it a long time ago so If It's wack its all good: This song is dedicated to the one’s that never made it/ to see the light of day, pray when I say I hate it/ In all the Earthly struggles, in this my heart is torn/ Never forget the little ones that were never born/ Consumed in the womb by the darkness of the night/ Never be able to enjoy the pleasures of this Life/ Joys of a Husband, or the knowledge of a Wife, children of their own, to raise em in a loving home/ Deserted and alone, and for this we must atone/ through the generations/ 30 years of unholy legislations/ No walking down the isle for a high school, college graduation/ Congratulations, there are no birthday celebrations/ So for this, For the millions, light a candle in remembrance/ on the feast day of the Holy Innocence/ ~Eschaton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maydbyGOD Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 im tellin u, u guys need to have an "intro" to this track.. dex wrote the illest thing on abortion, from the words of a baby who was aborted... here is what he wrote.. its raw.. like he should spit it and then the beat should come on... fo real. yo the Voice who never spoke My presence outnumbers the stars. I have the ability to change the world. Probably the only remedy to the chaos I will never hear. Politicians decide if I am worth going through birth. My growth is broken because I haven't spoken yet. You didn't have a need for me, but I have always been ready. Give me the ability to speak and I will scream for my freedom. I will scream to breath freely. Free me from the shackles that I am too small to bare. If you're scared of seeing my face, let's exchange place. Imagine finishing the race but never recieving the prize. Imagine seeing beauty but being partially blind. Imagine given life but in the end being denied. I'm scared too, but the only person that needs to know is too selfish to care. I am the voice that can never make a difference. I am the voice that the world can never stop to listen. I have been created but now I am just a figment of your imagination. Just another useless voice who never existed. If I had the ability to speak, I will scream for my freedom. I will scream to breath freely. Free me... © 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flip Posted August 20, 2004 Share Posted August 20, 2004 this would be dope. like a pre-track before the abortion track starts. just another of dex 1's ill poetry.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dUSt Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Yo, I just confirmed with Righteous B. He's going to be on this track. Cool huh? I'll send him the beat and he'll drop a verse from his studio. Should we get the other verses recorded with the hook done before we send it to B? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Just Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 Yo!!!!! This track is gonna hit hard!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Just Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 [quote name='dUSt' date='Aug 25 2004, 12:25 PM'] Yo, I just confirmed with Righteous B. He's going to be on this track. Cool huh? I'll send him the beat and he'll drop a verse from his studio. Should we get the other verses recorded with the hook done before we send it to B? [/quote] yeah maybe we should get all the verse done first... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo Posted August 25, 2004 Author Share Posted August 25, 2004 [quote]Should we get the other verses recorded with the hook done before we send it to B? [/quote] chore. I am gonna try and get home the first weekend in September to finish all my recording. Holla! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dUSt Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 I'm not really feeling the beat. I think the piano sample is good, but the drums seem a little generic. The high hat sound is particularly annoying... Can you try some different things to see if we can improve upon this Just? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Just Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 ok sure, I'll change up the drums a bit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Just Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 [url="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mcjustmusic.htm"]http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mcjustmusic.htm[/url] ok i update the pro-life drum... Peep it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dUSt Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 [quote name='MC Just' date='Aug 26 2004, 12:57 PM'] [url="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mcjustmusic.htm"]http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mcjustmusic.htm[/url] ok i update the pro-life drum... Peep it... [/quote] Sounds like the same one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Just Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 no its different, i changed the hihat and all, and the snare...and pattern.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MC Just Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 you know what would be dope for an intro??? a girl gets out of her car to go into planned parenthood and some pro-life are standing outside, and one of them passes her some pro-life info and tries to tell her the evil of abortion, she goes in and a 1 min later she walks out and says thank you so much. I dont ever want to do this.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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