Apollo Posted June 20, 2004 Share Posted June 20, 2004 (edited) We should talk about stuff here. I will start. Hi...why don't Damien, Kiel, and I write a song for Aftermass about the sacrament of Reconciliation??? OK? OK. I'm a dork. Edited June 20, 2004 by Apollo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted June 21, 2004 Share Posted June 21, 2004 great idea ... ltes do it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo Posted July 13, 2004 Author Share Posted July 13, 2004 Bump... Kiel, have you gotten round to writing your verse for this yet??? As soon as you do, post it so I can start mine. Thanx. Peace, Paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 13, 2004 Share Posted July 13, 2004 Im in the middle of my trinity verse...holla at a boy via Phone ninja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 14, 2004 Share Posted July 14, 2004 Ok Me and Apollo think we have the beat produced by Mo the Black. He should have it uploaded on his soundclick site shortly. An idea we have is that the hook not be rapped, but rather the first hook is Paul going into confession with Pontifex...you know "forgive me father for I have sinned...my last confession was...in the name of the father...etc...etc until the part of actually confessing...then goes Apollos verse. Followed by the next hook of Pontifex assigning penance which will be rhymed by Damien...youll get the idea when you hear the beat. -Moses the Black Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo Posted July 14, 2004 Author Share Posted July 14, 2004 Soundclick isn't letting me upload right now for some reason. I will try again tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 14, 2004 Share Posted July 14, 2004 this is a rough draft...its 20 bars though...Ill make the beat longer My minds filled with the thoughts of the past This time kills as my conscience asks Was I sacred of my faith silent within the crowd unprepared for debate when the bashing got loud and its Time to keep account for the countless times I found my life swimmin in mounds of lies how could I Bear impurity through thoughts and sight It blocks my light leading to the longest nights and Times where my pride overrides my judgment and My mind gets alligned with worldly substance And I’m Deceived by the concieved thought of my deceny Receive me please and wash my iniquities Even those that I know not when I commit conceal nothing Lord so I can submit but have I Doubted you or blindly believe cause I can count times when mind could concieve ideas and thoughts that attacked your existence I attacked back but got scared with persistance Ignorance is bliss and I miss my innocence But I got to keep going…I got to finish this Kiel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flip Posted July 14, 2004 Share Posted July 14, 2004 Moses The black is one of the most dopest rappers ever. He makes J the Primate look like a chump....... a small brown swinging from the trees chump.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 14, 2004 Share Posted July 14, 2004 It's J's prime rib and Mo's Blackened chicken all the way baby. Mo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 17, 2004 Share Posted July 17, 2004 whos next to rip it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dUSt Posted July 17, 2004 Share Posted July 17, 2004 "Ignorance is bliss and I miss my innocence But I got to keep going…I got to finish this" Wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 18, 2004 Share Posted July 18, 2004 the beat we will use for this track can be found here [url="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/mosblackenedchicken.htm"]http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/mosblackenedchicken.htm[/url] -Mo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
point5 Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Hey Paul you asked for me verse and me verse you received...Im anxious to hear your stuff now....let me have it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollo Posted July 29, 2004 Author Share Posted July 29, 2004 [quote]Hey Paul you asked for me verse and me verse you received...Im anxious to hear your stuff now....let me have it [/quote] So be it... In the name of the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit A year’s past since last I confessed because I’ve feared it When I peer in the mirror in the morn, I can’t bear it I must share it with the Paraclete now or forget it I’m a…SLAVE to sinning, from the very beginning Such a…GRAVE decision, but the Devil is winnin With Every… FAKE ambition, I’m misleadin the mission It’s like I…HATE religion, but get ripped by conviction Listen…my pride strives to tempt eyes of passerbyes In lust I trust to smell of elderberries my purity dry Anger…endangers strangers that I feel threatened by Sloth…has got caught of my vitality, Why? Greed…plants the money tree seeds in me And Envy…my enemy is rendering jealousy Gluttony…has gotten me habitually hungry Through self seeking and serving, and it’s only hurting me Please…I’m on my knees…I need to breathe Satan’s squeeze…is killin me…it's killin me Please...I'm on my knees...I need to breathe I need to breathe...I need to breathe Well...what's the good word? P.S. I made mine 20 bars as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flip Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 i totally just rhymed that out...and they way i did it was dope. but im sure apollo will kill it 20 times doper!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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