Theologian in Training Posted June 13, 2004 Share Posted June 13, 2004 I am saddened by the lack of poetic appreciation on this forum. There are thousands of people registered on this site, and there was an overwhelming 30(roughly rounded) responses to the Poetry voting thread. I understand that many are adverse to poetry, as it reminds them of school, and having to painfully get through a less than exciting poem. However, I am of the mindset that if you can appreciate a beautiful movie or a beautiful book, you can also appreciate a beautiful poem. Granted, not all poems are beautiful, nor grammitcally or phonetically pleasing but I do think there has to be one poem out there that someone loves, and loves for a certain reason. You listen to music, sometimes some of the most beautiful songs are constructed in the style of well-formed poem. They may not flow in the same way, but the poem still underlies the song. Think of it this way, the poem takes an ordinary moment in time, something that may be done constantly each day, and breathes new life into it. In essence, it gives new sight to a common thing or occurrence. For example, I am sure all of you know Robert Frost's "Road Not Taken" with its memorable beginning "Two roads diverged in a yellow wood / And sorry I could not travel both / And be one traveller long I stood / And looked down as far as I could / To where it bent in the undergrowth." He is simply talking about making a decision, what road should he travel, where should he go, and in taking that road what will be the overall result? If anyone has read the poem they know that he takes the road less travelled and to quote him, "That had made all the difference." He is merely placing for us a simple occurence of making a decision, of what road to choose. We make decisions each day, some more important than others. For example, in the vocations thread people are constantly trying to discern the Will of God and most of them are also faced with two roads ie: marriage or priesthood. One can argue that the priesthood is a road that is "grassy and wanted wear" because this day and age no one wants to take such a road, they would rather travel the other road, which is "just as fair" However, if you notice eventually he realizes the road he has chosen was for him, even though in the back of his mind he is always "keeping the first for another day." It is only when he realizes how "way leads on to way" that he "doubted if he should ever come back." in other words, that the decision he made, is, in essence, his vocation. He sees that, and that is what he comes to the conclusion of at the end when stating how in taking the one less travelled, it "has made all the difference." Again, Frost has taken a simple occurrence, something we face everyday, a decision, and has looked at it and presented it in a new and different way. He has redefined a common and trite occurrence by making it more cosmic, in a sense. He has made something ordinary extraordinary with the written word, and expressing it poetically. How boring life would be without poetry Something that a lot of have difficulty with is mourning for someone who has died or for really trying to understand why someone has fallen sick and trying to make sense of it. Granted, we cannot make sense of things completely because we are not God, but still we do try to make sense of things. I believe that poetry while not only redefining common moments, can also help bring understanding to something completely elusive to us. A poem is not merely a collection of words meant to be beautiful, but words that live and breathe and touch you. We know how imporant the Word is, and we can never imitate such strength, because it is divinely inspired, but there is something about the written word that has the power to paint, create, and form. How can we take words so lightely? We read a novel and are moved, a poem is sometimes a composite of an entire novel, that is what makes it so amazing. I cannot tell you how many times a poem has helped draw me closer to God, helped me mourn the death of those I have loved, help me let go of those I had become attached to, or even make sense of not only my own sickness but the sickness of others. There is power in poetry...God has given to us for a reason. I would ask you all to find your favorite poem and read it and truly make an effort to understand its impact and beauty. Some have called poetry the language of the soul, how come we take it for granted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 13, 2004 Author Share Posted June 13, 2004 [b]Robert Frost[/b] [b][i]Road Not Taken[/i][/b] Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler, long I stood And looked down one as far as I could To where it bent in the undergrowth. Then took the other, as just as fair, And having perhaps the better claim, Because it was grassy and wanted wear; Though as for that the passing there Had worn them really about the same. And both that morning equally lay In leaves no step had trodden black. Oh, I kept the first for another day! Yet knowing how way leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back. I shall be telling this with a sigh Somewhere ages and ages hence: Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-- I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 13, 2004 Author Share Posted June 13, 2004 [b]Li-Young Lee[/b] [b][i]My Father in Heaven[/i][/b] My father, in heaven, is reading out loud to himself Psalms or news. Now he ponders what he's read. No. He is listening for the sound of children in the yard. Was that laughing or crying? So much depends upon the answer, for either he will go on reading, or he'll run to save a child's day from grief. As it is in heaven, so it was on earth. Because my father walked the earth with a grave, determined rhythm, my shoulders ached from his gaze. Because my father's shoulders ached from the pulling of oars, my life now moves with a powerful back-and-forth rhythm: nostalgia, speculation. Because he made me recite a book a month, I forget everything as soon as I read it. And knowledge never comes but while I'm mid-stride a flight of stairs, or lost a moment on some avenue. A remarkable disappointment to him, I am like anyone who arrives late in the millennium and is unable to stay to the end of days. The world's beginnings are obscure to me, its outcomes inaccessible. I don't understand the source of starlight, or starlight's destinations. And already another year slides out of balance. But I don't disparage scholars; my father was one and I loved him, who packed his bags once, and all of our belongings, then sat down to await instruction from his god, yes, but also from a radio. At the doorway, I watched, and I suddenly knew he was one like me, who got my learning under a lintel; he was one of the powerless, to whom knowledge came while he sat among suitcases, boxes, old newspapers, string. He did not decide peace or war, home or exile, escape by land or escape by sea. He waited merely, as always someone waits, far, near, here, hereafter, to find out: is it praise or lament hidden in the next moment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 13, 2004 Author Share Posted June 13, 2004 [b]Marie Howe[/b] [b][i]What The Living Do[/b][/i] Johnny, the kitchen sink has been clogged for days, some utensil probably fell down there. And the Drano won't work but smells dangerous, and the crusty dishes have piled up waiting for the plumber I still haven't called. This is the everyday we spoke of. It's winter again: the sky's a deep, headstrong blue, and the sunlight pours through the open living-room windows because the heat's on too high in here and I can't turn it off. For weeks now, driving, or dropping a bag of groceries in the street, the bag breaking, I've been thinking: This is what the living do. And yesterday, hurrying along those wobbly bricks in the Cambridge sidewalk, spilling my coffee down my wrist and sleeve, I thought it again, and again later, when buying a hairbrush: This is it. Parking. Slamming the car door shut in the cold. What you called that yearning. What you finally gave up. We want the spring to come and the winter to pass. We want whoever to call or not call, a letter, a kiss--we want more and more and then more of it. But there are moments, walking, when I catch a glimpse of myself in the window glass, say, the window of the corner video store, and I'm gripped by a cherishing so deep for my own blowing hair, chapped face, and unbuttoned coat that I'm speechless: I am living. I remember you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crusader1234 Posted June 14, 2004 Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b][u]La Belle Dame sans Merci [/u] John Keats [/b] Ah, what can ail thee, wretched wight, Alone and palely loitering; The sedge is wither'd from the lake, And no birds sing. Ah, what can ail thee, wretched wight, So haggard and so woe-begone? The squirrel's granary is full, And the harvest's done. I see a lily on thy brow, With anguish moist and fever dew; And on thy cheek a fading rose Fast withereth too. I met a lady in the meads Full beautiful, a faery's child; Her hair was long, her foot was light, And her eyes were wild. I set her on my pacing steed, And nothing else saw all day long; For sideways would she lean, and sing A faery's song. I made a garland for her head, And bracelets too, and fragrant zone; She look'd at me as she did love, And made sweet moan. She found me roots of relish sweet, And honey wild, and manna dew; And sure in language strange she said, I love thee true. She took me to her elfin grot, And there she gaz'd and sighed deep, And there I shut her wild sad eyes-- So kiss'd to sleep. And there we slumber'd on the moss, And there I dream'd, ah woe betide, The latest dream I ever dream'd On the cold hill side. I saw pale kings, and princes too, Pale warriors, death-pale were they all; Who cry'd--"La belle Dame sans merci Hath thee in thrall!" I saw their starv'd lips in the gloam With horrid warning gaped wide, And I awoke, and found me here On the cold hill side. And this is why I sojourn here Alone and palely loitering, Though the sedge is wither'd from the lake, And no birds sing. This poem always makes me laugh because it sounds sort of romantic, but when you boil it down its actually sort of comical. When you boil it down on a friday afternoon at an all boys highschool, it gets even more comical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 Should prolly change this thread to the Poetry Depreciation thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crusader1234 Posted June 14, 2004 Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b][u]Sonnet 18[/u] William Shakespeare[/b] Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate: Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer's lease hath all too short a date: Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; And every fair from fair sometime declines, By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd; But thy eternal summer shall not fade Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest; Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou growest: So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this and this gives life to thee This poem is more of a self admiration than a love poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 Alright I realize you don't like the typical poets...so lets try another medium. [b]2 Pac[/b] [b][i]When Ur Hero Falls[/b][/i] when your hero falls from grace all fairy tales r uncovered myths exposed and pain magnified the greatest pain discovered u taught me 2 be strong but im confused 2 c u so weak u said never 2 give up and it hurts 2 c u welcome defeat when ure hero falls so do the stars and so does the perception of tomorrow without my hero there is only me alone 2 deal with my sorrow your heart ceases 2 work and your soul is not happy at all what r u expected 2 do when ure only hero falls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crusader1234 Posted June 14, 2004 Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b][i]Positively Fourth Street[/i] Bob Dylan[/b] You got a lotta nerve To say you are my friend When I was down You just stood there grinning You got a lotta nerve To say you got a helping hand to lend You just want to be on The side that's winning You say I let you down You know it's not like that If you're so hurt Why then don't you show it You say you lost your faith But that's not where it's at You had no faith to lose And you know it I know the reason That you talk behind my back I used to be among the crowd You're in with Do you take me for such a fool To think I'd make contact With the one who tries to hide What he don't know to begin with You see me on the street You always act surprised You say, "How are you?" "Good luck" But you don't mean it When you know as well as me You'd rather see me paralyzed Why don't you just come out once And scream it No, I do not feel that good When I see the heartbreaks you embrace If I was a master thief Perhaps I'd rob them And now I know you're dissatisfied With your position and your place Don't you understand It's not my problem I wish that for just one time You could stand inside my shoes And just for that one moment I could be you Yes, I wish that for just one time You could stand inside my shoes You'd know what a drag it is To see you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b]Paul Simon[/b] [b][i]Slip Slidin Away[/b][/i] Slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away You know the nearer your destination The more you're slip slidin' away I know a man He came from my home town He wore his passion for his woman Like a thorny crown He said Dolores I live in fear My love for you's so overpowering I'm afraid that I will disappear Slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away You know the nearer your destination The more you're slip slidin' away I know a woman Became a wife These are the very words she uses To describe her life She said a good day Ain't got no rain She said a bad day's when I lie in bed And think of things that might have been Slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away You know the nearer your destination The more you're slip slidin' away And I know a fa-ther Who had a son He longed to tell him all the reasons For the things he'd done He came a long way Just to explain He kissed his boy as he lay sleeping Then he turned around and headed home again Slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away You know the nearer your destination The more you're slip slidin' away God only knows God makes his plan The information's unavailable To the mortal man We work our jobs Collect our pay Believe we're gliding down the highway When in fact we're slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away You know the nearer your destination The more you're slip slidin' away Slip slidin' away You know the nearer your destination The more you're slip slidin' away Mmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b]Pink Floyd[/b] [b][i]Mother[/b][/i] Mother, do you think they'll drop the bomb? Mother, do you think they'll like the song? Mother, do you think they'll try to break my balls? Ooh ah, Mother, should I build a wall? Mother, should I run for president? Mother, should I trust the government? Mother, will they put me in the firing line? Ooh ah, Is it just a waste of time? Hush now baby, baby, don't you cry. Mamma's gonna make all of your nightmares come true, Mamma's gonna put all of her fears into you, Mamma's gonna keep you right here, under her wing. She won't let you fly, but she might let you sing, Mamma's gonna keep baby cosy and warm. Oooh babe, Oooh babe, Oooh babe, Of course Mamma's gonna help build the wall. Mother, do you think she's good enough, for me? Mother, do you think she's dangerous, to me? Mother, will she tear your little boy apart? Ooh ah, Mother, will she break my heart? Hush now baby, baby, don't you cry. Mamma's going to check out all your girlfriends for you, Mamma won't let anyone dirty get through, Mamma's gonna wait up until you get in. Mamma will always find out where you've been, Mamma's gonna keep baby healthy and clean. Oooh babe, Oooh babe, Oooh babe, You'll always be baby to me. Mother, did it need to be so high? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 TinT [b][i]Faith[/b][/i] I will walk on water Once When my faith is strong Taking strides, Balanced on mirrored footsteps, Watching the sun dance In tiny ripples I will try to find my way To the other side. Only, just when I come close I will remember, like St. Peter, That I am only a man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b]Billy Collins[/b] Former Poet Laureate of America [b][i]Why I Could Never Be a Buddhist[/b][/i] "All that exists is the movement of the breathing." — Shunryu Suzuki I wake up early and lie uncovered on the summer bed staring at the white closet doors, listening to the hum of the fan which has drawn in the cooler night air — your ghost-form next to me wrapped tightly in a sheet. I would love to be as empty as the rice bowls of the dead, but the squirrel on the hickory tree outside with a nut in his mouth, reminds me of the need to save, and the mirror on the wall containing a small oval edition of this room is a medieval warning against vanity. I hear the faint hum of a plane and picture a woman in the window seat crossing her legs and opening a magazine, then I think of the Wright Brothers, who never married, working in their bicycle shop, spoked wheels hanging from nails in the walls. Even the sight of my own feet, crossed on the bed, reminds me of the sinewy feet of the saints that I used to kneel before as a boy — the feet of St. Bartholomew, the feet of St. Anthony of the Desert, braided with muscle, the feet of St. Sebastian pierced with arrows, and the benevolent feet of St. Francis, who in one painting is leaning back in rapture outside the mouth of a cave while behind him an iconographic rabbit peeps out of a stone wall, a little symbol of God knows what. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b]Turin Brakes[/b] [b][i]Rain City[/b][/i] Opened my eyes, had a dream last night, that both my arms were broken, Evening time, Help me now or hold me down, I feel my world is tumbling, Spiralling down, Oh my love I can't let go, Something's wrong I can't let go, Nature's cruel, she's laughing, As I feel my way through the century, As I slowly turn to house dust, Tumbling down, The rain comes down like a victory, In sheets of shining memory, Over and over, Circling around, Oh my love I can't let go, Something's wrong I can't let go, Nature's cruel she's laughing, Almost too much for my heart, When it rains, Oh tears my soul apart, When it rains, Almost too much for my heart, In a dream, Oh tears my soul apart, The rain clouds move so slowly, Above the city where I'm from... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theologian in Training Posted June 14, 2004 Author Share Posted June 14, 2004 [b]Counting Crows[/b] [b][i]Mrs. Potter's Lullabye[/b][/i] Well I woke in mid-afternoon cause that's when it all hurts the most I dream I never know anyone at the party and I'm always the host If dreams are like movies, then memories are films about ghosts You can never escape, you can only move south down the coast well, I am an idiot walking a tightrope of fortune and fame I am an acrobat swinging trapezes through circles of flame If you've never stared off in the distance, then your life is a shame and though I'll never forget your face, sometimes i can't remember my name Hey Mrs. Potter don't cry Hey Mrs. Potter I know why but Hey Mrs. Potter won't you talk to me Well, there's a piece of Maria in every song that I sing And the price of a memory is the memory of the sorrow it brings And there is always one last light to turn out and one last bell to ring And the last one out of the circus has to lock up everything Or the elephants will get out and forget to remember what you said And the ghosts of the tilt-a-whirl will linger inside your head And the ferris wheel junkies will spin there forever instead When I see you a blanket of stars covers me in my bed Hey Mrs. Potter don't go Hey Mrs. Potter I don't know but Hey Mrs. Potter won't you talk to me All the blue light reflections that color my mind when I sleep And the lovesick rejections that accompany the company I keep All the razor perceptions that cut just a little too deep Hey I can bleed as well as anyone, but I need someone to help me sleep So I throw my hand into the air and it swims in the beams It's just a brief interruption of the swirling dust sparkle jet stream Well, I know I don't know you and you're probably not what you seem But I'd sure like to find out So why don't you climb down off that movie screen Hey Mrs. Potter don't turn Hey Mrs. Potter I burn for you Hey Mrs. Potter won't you talk to me When the last king of Hollywood shatters his glass on the floor and orders another Well, I wonder what he did that for That's when I know that I have to get out cause I have been there before So I gave up my seat at the bar and I head for the door We drove out to the desert just to lie down beneath this bowl of stars We stand up in the palace like it's the last of the great pioneer town bars We shout out these songs against the clang of electric guitars You can see a million miles tonight But you can't get very far Oh, you can see a million miles tonight But you can't get very far Hey Mrs. Potter I won't touch Hey Mrs. Potter it's not much but Hey Mrs. Potter won't you talk to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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