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Pax_et bonum

I'm writing a short story for class, and the main character needs to be killed. How?
I think a mob of townspeople kills him, not an individual or assassin or anything. No guns, and I don't think he is killed by knives either. Nor is he stoned to death, but rocks may be used.
So, how is he killed?

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Lil'Monster

poision...he accidently drinks poision

But that poision doesnt kill him rightaway

He gets struck by lighting which kills him


I dont know

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He's cursed, pulled apart and eaten by starving but genetically-enhanced children (hence the strength), drawn and quarted, eaten from the inside-out by small blade-limbed insects, touches the ark and dies, develops gangrene from a wound and enters septic shock, bleeds profusely from all orafices as a result of disease (or aforementioned curse), drowns in his own blood and mucus (can happen), has his head seperated from his body and kept alive by machines so he can watch said body be dissected, vomits chunks of gastro-intestinal tract that have been removed by colon-dwelling worms with serratted teeth, gets caught in an elevator door, is hung by his own intestines, subjected to scaphism (look it up. Or...um...don't...), flayed alive and forced to carry his hide across a filthy swamp thereby incurring untold infections and dying of blood loss, disease, septic shock, or animal attack, mutilated in the street, given a drill to the eye, or fed some bad ham.

And if all else fails you can always fall back on good, old-fashioned explosive diarhea.

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Lil'Monster

No one likes my comment? :sad2:





How about he drowns in his bathtub??





I KNOW! HOW ABOUT YOU COMBINE ALL THESE IDEAS INTO ONE!!!

[quote name='Spooky' timestamp='1334893852' post='2421139']
He's cursed, pulled apart and eaten by starving but genetically-enhanced children (hence the strength), drawn and quarted, eaten from the inside-out by small blade-limbed insects, touches the ark and dies, develops gangrene from a wound and enters septic shock, bleeds profusely from all orafices as a result of disease (or aforementioned curse), drowns in his own blood and mucus (can happen), has his head seperated from his body and kept alive by machines so he can watch said body be dissected, vomits chunks of gastro-intestinal tract that have been removed by colon-dwelling worms with serratted teeth, gets caught in an elevator door, is hung by his own intestines, subjected to scaphism (look it up. Or...um...don't...), flayed alive and forced to carry his hide across a filthy swamp thereby incurring untold infections and dying of blood loss, disease, septic shock, or animal attack, mutilated in the street, given a drill to the eye, or fed some bad ham.

And if all else fails you can always fall back on good, old-fashioned explosive diarhea.
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THat....That is disgusting.....I think I am going to throw up now!

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[quote name='Lil'Monster' timestamp='1334893958' post='2421141']
No one likes my comment? :sad2:





How about he drowns in his bathtub??





I KNOW! HOW ABOUT YOU COMBINE ALL THESE IDEAS INTO ONE!!!
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I like your comment! :V Don't be sad! :(

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Lil'Monster

[quote name='Pax_et bonum' timestamp='1334894397' post='2421147']
It's not an accident; the people are out for his blood.
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They hire a vampire to suc.k his blood out and then the mob rushed out and started to beat his bloodly body. I dont know

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Lil'Monster

[quote name='Spooky' timestamp='1334894011' post='2421143']
I like your comment! :V Don't be sad! :(
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:)

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[quote name='Pax_et bonum' timestamp='1334892665' post='2421128']
I'm writing a short story for class, and the main character needs to be killed. How?
I think a mob of townspeople kills him, not an individual or assassin or anything. No guns, and I don't think he is killed by knives either. Nor is he stoned to death, but rocks may be used.
So, how is he killed?
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrv1roq_gBw

Take this scene and add your own twist. Maybe more futuristic, or even more medieval. I'm not sure where or when your story is based, but base the death scene of of this style, if you like.

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Pax_et bonum

The mob beat him up and spat on him before throwing him off some kind of cliff. It's a bit more dramatic in the story... Thanks for all your help, peeps!

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